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Shuzari Pour Yassiej

necrisidragon

Published: Feb 20, 2010

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Okay number 9 on my list. Here is Shazuri for

Also my first fullbody wolf. and I must say i'm prett glad how it turned out. The paws could use some inprovement.

I hope you like it

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Amexis

Feb 22, 2010

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_{Well, let's write Kimmy a little critique. ;D [ Wich makes this actually my first official critique ]

To get started, you can be seriously very proud of this drawing. It looks just gorgeous, and especially if I think of the fact that you don't really draw wolves that much.
Overall, the anatomy looks quite good. Such poses are quite difficult, I've experienced that myself too. c:
But the right back paw looks a bit weird. As if it's a bit dislocated. Maybe you should draw the paw 'facing' the other side...?
Allso, I am missing her right front paw. :C
The wing rather starts in the center of the back, than at the shoulder or between the both shoulder blades.
But at the other side, the hair looks very, very pretty and realistic. The color itself is very fitting, while the shine on it makes it look like it's real, and it just curls so pretty. ♥
And the tail looks very fluffy to - I love fluffy things. |D

This is a very, very good result, even though all your other drawings are very pretty, this is one of your best ones. (: ♥
Hope my crit was a bit helpfull? :'D}