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Posters, Moebius and Hansje by necrisidragon Posters, Moebius and Hansje by necrisidragon
So I had to make posters for my graphic design class.

One is for the extremely odd but well drawn comic of Mobius.

The other is for a lecture from Hansje van Halem at our school. I am really late with turning it in but considering what I have on my mind they don't really mind. As long as I turn it in.

I am not really Crazy about my Hansje van Halem poster. I made the letters with paper. But the glue was annoying.

I hope you will have some constructive criticism
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I think the poster on the left is rather interesting. It's very original and makes me want to find out more about it. One downside to that, though, I can't still really figure it out. It seems like some octopus-like plant clasping a cut hand, but the hand itself is clasping the plant too? It's probably your intention to let people think about it, but a little more suggestive help wouldn't seem bad to me. I do like the use of color, the hand's very outstanding and attracts attention. Also, "Is mens lekker" is very strong, and the font you used definitely supports the theme of this poster.

The poster on the right seemed a bit odd to me in the first place, but now I look at it for some longer, I see different things in it that I actually like. I like the use of the arrows, the strange pattern and the almost hypnotizing diamonds behind the text. Though, I am of the opinion that "Hansje" doesn't attract enough attention. I think the use of different fonts is good, but for some reason, maybe it would be better to make the spacing between the letters a tad bigger, just for the spatial view. Maybe you could make the orange text a little more crazy as well, just to fit the overall picture?

In general, I think the left poster would attract my attention if walking by, but the right one wouldn't specificly. I guess I would be like "Woah, that's a weird poster, and walk on." The complicity of the right one is a strong point of it, but can also be a downside, it can be too much.

I hope my critice was useful to you, good luck with your project! :aww:
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MarsmallowMe Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Whoah, awesome! Ze zien er echt goed uit!
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necrisidragon Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Dankjewel:D
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Evanlynn Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist
The one on the left is reaaaaly awesome. xD
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necrisidragon Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks:D
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ScatterbrainsX Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012
Love the left one, but of course i had already seen it ;) You changed the type, like it! Colors really match with the comic :)
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